When I’m hurt. . .
I’m..hot. . .
I’m lost…
In thoughts…
Every hair strand on my body gets dreadlocked…
My brain like two threads deadlocked…
The realities leaves me shell-shocked. . .
When I’m hurt, I dont cry. . .
I wear a big smile with mediterranean water dripping from my eyes
Thats how I feel. . .thats the price
I pay when you say the truth by telling me lies
When I’m hurt is when I love
And it seems to you a stone-cold bluff
When will my best ever be enough
Cos pleasing you seems pretty tough. . .
When I’m hurt. . .
Sadness clouds my thoughts cos of you…
And rains into my existence a heartful avarar of you
Priceless as the unobtanium* on Pandora, no lie..its true
Oh gosh.. .where is mother “Eywa“*…I desire to be one of you. .
When I’m hurt…
I struggle between the strong wave and tide of my tears
Searching for how best to express my fears
While you busy playing tiers*
At this point your laughter sounds so fierce. .
When I’m hurt..
I know its a test
Cos I still keep treasures in my chest
If an eagle makes Kehlsteinhaus* its nest
Then surely, in Allah will my heart will find rest
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unobtanium: precious mineral found in Pandoria talked about in the movie Avatar
Pandora: A lush, Earth-like moon with an atmosphere poisonous to humans in the Alpha Centauri star system (Avatar movie)
Eywa: The mother goddess worshiped by the Navis (Avatar Movie)
Tiers: or Ultra Checkers, is a complex variant of checkers that allows players to upgrade their pieces beyond kings
Kehlsteinhaus : in English-speaking countries also known as the Eagle’s Nest
woah!! you took me on journey with this script bro! … The test of a true poet, if you can make them feel what you feel or see what you see.. then you have achieved something special 🙂
Wooooooaaaaa!!!!!. . .Now I feel like a field marshal on top of an elegant stallion. . .You just encouraged me!!!! Thanks alot. Your poems inspire me too. . .:)
I’m speechless.
As a addicted fan of eminem, I’ll say you just won me over with ur rhymes and thoughts.
Nice one bro…I will come back after I have read this like a gazillion times….I must burn each word and phrase into my brain.
Lol. . .thanks bro. . .thats what the “loner” life has turned me into. Loneliness gets my pen to speak.. .
Impressed. But all dis avatar referrals, are u sure u were not in d avatar state when u wrote dis? Beautiful all d same!
Lol…Maimuna. . .thanks.
Thanks l♥√ع, I really appreciate it. Ʊ’v made M̶̲̅ε feel better already, wish I could giv Ʊ a hug right now n I’m not HURT anymore *toothy grin*
Anything for Tayo. . .:)
Ahhhh…Lukman thanx a lot, I appreciate….Good Job though!
Mixed feelings and emotions
Our cry in the closet and happy face in the sun is just the kinda battle between “giving up” and “standing tall”
Obviously from the heart! *thumbs up*